Blue eyes~

This is a wonderful piece of work. Your colors are very vivid and the hair is a masterpiece. Anyone can easily see that the hair must have taken a long time, at least any one who has tried to color/draw hair like this.

Vision: 5 stars. You get five stars because everyone should receive five stars for vision. I nor anyone else knows exactly how this artist intended the picture to be so I nor anyone else can say whether or not there was real vision for this picture or not.

Originality: 4 stars. I struggled with what to give you for originality. It is definitely one of a kind in many ways but I think that the brown hair, blue eyes, manga girl style is used a lot... Although, I could see one arguing about there not being much else to draw style-wise after all, there is manga/anime, realistic, cartoon.

Technique: 4.5 stars. Your technique I must admit is wonderful. It is hard to find many traditional pieces of art. Most of them are digital and personally I believe that traditional art is the more worthwhile way to invest your time. After all, all you need is a pencil and a piece of paper, instead of a computer and a mouse and a electrical outlet etc. Also your lines are clear, the details are good but not to overbearing.

Impact: 4.5 stars. The overall impact of this picture is almost perfect. The colors don't clash, the proportions are good, the 3D-ness is very good, the hair is wonderfully detailed, the eyes appear to be alive, along with the color of the cheeks.